Alternative Lord's Prayer

At a recent Lent Study, members were encouraged to write an alternative Lord's Prayer.
Caroline Churcher provided the following.

To the one who cares for and loves everyone
Who is everywhere
Your name is above all names. You are the Holy One
Your Kingdom is ours to live in
By your will and purpose we can make this Kingdom work
Satisfy all our needs both physical and spiritual
When we do wrong, forgive us when we ask you,
and when we are wronged help us to forgive those who wrong us
Keep us on the straight and narrow, honest and trusting only in you.
Your Kingdom, power and glory are all yours and we worship you.

Amen